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RE: My untitled story - lol - 11-04-2012
I'm letting you know in advance that I'm going to copy, alter, and post my revision of your story on my blog.
Changed my mind. I'm simply going to do a comic.
RE: My untitled story - Qwertygiy - 11-04-2012
(11-04-2012, 04:01 AM)Walrus Wrote: You really gotta make these stories more exciting. Many things that you write are well-worded, easy to understand, but I am afraid that the reader wouldn't enjoy it because when you talk, it's like reading a college textbook.
I refer to you The Mysterious Benedict Society. Find that, flip through it, and see if my stuff still seems complicated. That trilogy was a best-seller a few years ago so I'm not referring to just some little thing far out in the depths of history when everyone wrote in long complicated words 24/7.
Also, when I'm writing dialogue for Will, I am trying to be a bit 'academic', because of his upbringing.
RE: My untitled story - Qwertygiy - 11-08-2012
For once, Google Ads seems to have done something somewhat relevant.
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