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Rate my Buildism Story so far. - Fish - 05-06-2011 Quote:One day Fish and Fwluffy was walking to Light's Dojo. But Light wasn't their. Dominus tenebris was a evil master mind :o I am making a movie. This is only the very start of it. What do you think? Rate it out of 10! ^_^ Thanks! RE: Rate my Buildism Story so far. - Duck - 05-06-2011 You really need to proofread. RE: Rate my Buildism Story so far. - Fish - 05-06-2011 (05-06-2011, 02:56 PM)Duck Wrote: You really need to proofread. What's a proofread? RE: Rate my Buildism Story so far. - Qwertygiy - 05-07-2011 Spellcheck. Sometimes I can't quite tell what's happening in the story due to misspelled/misplaced words. This isn't chat -- it's a storyboard, so it's important for us to know EXACTLY what's happening. |