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Is this alright? - Fat_Sacks - 05-13-2011 I have an essay due tommorow and I'm doing it last-minute, keep in mind this is a rough draft. When I grow up, I would like to become a concept artist and/or programmer for Bungie, a very successful videogame company. For me, both jobs can be really easy, because I love the game company, and can draw concept art for any of their games in a snap and I already know some of the programming language called Lua, I can easily alter any code in that language, depending on the game environment and I really hope I can learn C++, another scripting language that most games run on, in high school. The job requirements are not really that high, I already have most like professional attitude and an ability to take constructive criticism. Both jobs do require internship, like most other jobs in a videogame business. I think the best place to learn all the other job skills I would need is probably at a videogame-specializing, or design college. Probably the classes that can really jump-start me in high school are Photoshop class, java script class, and maybe web design. Photoshop can come in really handy at ANY art career in a videogame field, because I think in the future a lot of art-related jobs will strongly need at least some experience with virtual paint brushes. Java script can really help be out because it’s a programming language that is very similar to C++ and Lua. Web design can be very good to know how to do, since it can help out in programming and Bungie have a whole website with a large community of fans, it can come in really useful if they need anyone to replace Urk, the guy who manages atleast a third of the site and writes huge blog posts about new game updates. Not done, either, by the way. RE: Is this alright? - toast - 05-13-2011 javascript = one word RE: Is this alright? - Fat_Sacks - 05-13-2011 Oh, thanks. RE: Is this alright? - toast - 05-13-2011 "The job requirements are not really that high" somehow i doubt that its good though RE: Is this alright? - Fat_Sacks - 05-13-2011 Alright, thanks. I put this at the bottom of the page just for the lulz. I'll add finer details in the final draft. RE: Is this alright? - Ming-Yan - 05-13-2011 (05-13-2011, 01:46 AM)Interwebs Wrote: help be outShould be "me". Not trying to be hard on you but, this essay doesn't really have the standard layout...it seems more like a list and the beginning more of a praising of one's self. Try this pattern; Intro: -Grabber -topic, -background/info -background/info -thesis (3 main points) Body 1: -Point from thesis -observation/background/info -evidence (back up BG/info) -analysis (of what was explained) -conclusion/transition Body 2: -Point from thesis, -observation/background/info -evidence (back up BG/info), -analysis (of what was explained) -conclusion/transition Body 3: -Point from thesis -observation/background/info -evidence (back up BG/info) -analysis (of what was explained) -conclusion/transition Conclusion: -Restatement of thesis -although statement (something others would argue against) -sentence that proves statement wrong, -connections to society -ending sentence Things to note: Thesis - argument/ your stance; what you want to people to believe Evidence - hard facts (from your self or other source) RE: Is this alright? - TheFlame - 05-13-2011 Pretty good! RE: Is this alright? - Fat_Sacks - 05-15-2011 (05-13-2011, 01:58 AM)Ming-Yan Wrote:(05-13-2011, 01:46 AM)Interwebs Wrote: help be outShould be "me". That was half of my rough draft, plus this does kinda look like like a foundation to a persuasive essay. RE: Is this alright? - Ming-Yan - 05-16-2011 It is persuasive but all essays essential are like this. |