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I need some feedback for my newest song. - Qwertygiy - 09-20-2011
I started making another song using some melodies I've had sort of floating around for a while, and I like the beginning, but I can't seem to get a good middle and don't really have an ending yet. Should I add more basslines and submelodies? Should I add an alternate melody or two? Should I have more "instruments" or effects? I want to be able to finish it, but I'm a bit stumped on how to best do that.
Here's the song, "Dandelion Summer". Like I said, the middle's a bit muddled and there's no ending. http://keybored.x10.mx/musicdata/Dandelion%20Summer.mp3
RE: I need some feedback for my newest song. - Duck - 09-20-2011
That's awesome!
RE: I need some feedback for my newest song. - toast - 09-22-2011
Cool! Maybe some filters in there would help, or something. What did you use to make it?
RE: I need some feedback for my newest song. - Fat_Sacks - 09-22-2011
Some more instruments would help at around 1:00.
RE: I need some feedback for my newest song. - Qwertygiy - 09-22-2011
(09-22-2011, 03:38 AM)toast Wrote: What did you use to make it?
Linux MultiMedia Studio's Windows version.
Interwebs, if you mean the part where it goes "wobbly", that's supposed to be a somewhat "simpler" line -- only the lead and the basic background melody.
RE: I need some feedback for my newest song. - Scripter - 09-23-2011
I really enjoyed the song, but I'm not good at giving idea's for improvement
Even so, it's pretty good in my opinion.
RE: I need some feedback for my newest song. - Qwertygiy - 09-24-2011
Alright, I've "finished" it with three extra "verses". I added a slightly less powerful verse at the very end, and the two verses before the last....
I think you'll like.