My untitled story

[lol]

I'm letting you know in advance that I'm going to copy, alter, and post my revision of your story on my blog.

Changed my mind. I'm simply going to do a comic.

[Qwertygiy]

You really gotta make these stories more exciting. Many things that you write are well-worded, easy to understand, but I am afraid that the reader wouldn't enjoy it because when you talk, it's like reading a college textbook.

I refer to you The Mysterious Benedict Society. Find that, flip through it, and see if my stuff still seems complicated. That trilogy was a best-seller a few years ago so I'm not referring to just some little thing far out in the depths of history when everyone wrote in long complicated words 24/7.

Also, when I'm writing dialogue for Will, I am trying to be a bit 'academic', because of his upbringing.

[Qwertygiy]

For once, Google Ads seems to have done something somewhat relevant.