Guys, how do you like my report for school?

[sergentkyle]

Do you know who Bobby Bowden is? Well, you are about to find out. Bobby Bowden is the second most winning coach in college football history. He has won two national championships. This essay is to teach about Bobby Bowden. He was born on November 8th, 1929, in Birmingham, Alabama. He is extremely interested, and well known for coaching football at Florida State University.

His childhood was great, despite the fact he had rheumatic fever for about a year. This changed his life because it brought him closer to his family. His mother’s name was Sunset Bowden. His father’s name is unknown.

His biggest influence was his father. He helped Bobby through his childhood by always being on his side and being a good father. He was also influenced by Paul “Bear” Bryant; a big-time football coach. Bobby married Ann Bowden. Their first child, Robyn was born on July, 1951. Their second child, Steve was born September 1952. He is extremely interested, and well known for coaching football at Florida State University.

I am going to tell you about Bobby’s achievements. Bobby has won two National Championships. A National Championship is the award given to the team who wins the National Championship game. He is also the second most winning coach in College Football History. Bobby contributed to society because before every game, he talked to the players about Christ and gave them the opportunity to be saved.

Bobby lives in Tampa, Florida with his wife Ann. They speak in many churches. Bobby is 89 years old.

As you can see… Bobby Bowden was probably the greatest coach in football history. I learned from him to never give up because when he was a kid, he has rheumatic fever and doctors told him he would never play sports again. But a year later They said he could play football again.

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Nobody likes it

[Ming-Yan]

If you were in high school you would get a D or low C. Our paragraphs have to be at least 8 sentences, you can say "this essay is to teach [insert subject]" and you can't use a question as a grabber sentence.

But considering you aren't and this report is longer than a paragraph, I would give it a b plus or so. BTW, work on some of your commas.

[sergentkyle]

I am in 5'th grade... ._.

[Fat_Sacks]

I am in 5'th grade... ._.

Then how were you a Roblox mod in 20087 or 2008?

[sergentkyle]

1. I said I lied about that a month ago.

2. I won't be alive in 20087

[Fat_Sacks]

2008*

[McNoobster]

2008*

You could have just edited your post you know.

[Fat_Sacks]

2008*

You could have just edited your post you know.

This is faster

[Sazaho]

2008*

You could have just edited your post you know.

This is faster

It's also kind've lazy- but then again, I've just done it XD

[lol]

It's pretty good for fifth grade.