04-28-2011, 11:58 PM
If you were in high school you would get a D or low C. Our paragraphs have to be at least 8 sentences, you can say "this essay is to teach [insert subject]" and you can't use a question as a grabber sentence.
But considering you aren't and this report is longer than a paragraph, I would give it a b plus or so. BTW, work on some of your commas.
But considering you aren't and this report is longer than a paragraph, I would give it a b plus or so. BTW, work on some of your commas.
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