Added another chapter.
Something I'm a bit worried about is character uniformity. I'm not quite sure that I'm giving Ghosty and Mysty a good reliable personality and I think it's changing up a bit as I go along. Is anyone else noticing this or is it just overly-perfectionist author self-criticism?
Edit: Ha, I can't believe I didn't remember to take this bit out while I puzzle it over:
Any ideas? And no, Dignity, before you reply, "Ashely" won't work.
Something I'm a bit worried about is character uniformity. I'm not quite sure that I'm giving Ghosty and Mysty a good reliable personality and I think it's changing up a bit as I go along. Is anyone else noticing this or is it just overly-perfectionist author self-criticism?
Edit: Ha, I can't believe I didn't remember to take this bit out while I puzzle it over:
Quote:"No idea," Ghosty answered. "I haven't met any outlandish beings except a couple other random ghosts, that entourage that came after us, and [ put some suitable person's name here, I can't think of anyone right now ].
Any ideas? And no, Dignity, before you reply, "Ashely" won't work.