Scene 3 of my play for Drama
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(Un-named continues to give CPR to Grabski and Bow)
Un-named: MY FRIENDS!
Grabski: ....Yes?
Un-named: What about the other one?
Grabski: ....Bow...Bow....Bow..........
(Bow sits up then falls)
Un-named: My friend, why must they do this to you?
(Un-named helps Grabski up)
Grabski: Un-named, he's dead. There is nothing we can do.
Un-named: True...
Grabski: Anyway. 1 of these hell-hounds have been killed, now only 2 remain. The traitor Dodge and Fulani... They. Must. Die.
(All actors go off stage)
(They return in a 'car', 'area' changes to a cave)
Grabski: Un-named, are you sure this where Dodge is hiding?
Un-named: 99.99% certain.
Grabski: Good enough for me...
Un-named: My friend, we have arrived!
Grabski: Crap! Tanks!
Un-named: Get down!
Un-named(Whispering): Let them pass, or throw the grenades, your choice...
(Grabski throws a 'grenade' at 'tank')
Un-named: That outta get their attention... Grabski, I suggest we move quickly...
(Un-named and Grabski run into a 'cave')
Grabski: Do you hear that?
Soldier(Farhan, Faint): Tank team? Tank team!?
Grabski: They're onto us...
Un-named: Grabski, kill him... silently...
(Grabski tiptoes over to Farhan and 'knives' him)
(Farhan dies)
(Farhan goes off-stage)
Farhan(off-stage): Private? Hello!? Come in!
Grabski: Shut up, Dodge. We're coming for you, you traitor!
Dodge(off-stage): I'd like to see you try, we're sending air strikes onto your location anyway, goodbye Grabski and Un-named.
Un-named: We gotta---
(Bomb sound, Un-named is thrown across the stage and is 'hanging' onto a 'rock')
Grabski: Un-named!
(Grabski runs over to Un-named, ocasionally dodging 'falling rocks')
Grabski: I got you!
(More bomb sounds as Grabski helps Un-named up)
Un-named: We need to get out of here before this place literally collapses into that desert valley!
(Un-named and Grabski run around the area 30 times, occasionally bobm sounds are heard and they fall and get up)
Grabski: I see an exit!
Un-named: Oh crap! Predator Missile!!!!!!!!!!!
(Missile sound, then massive 'explosion')
Dodge(off-stage): You can stop all the bombing now, all targets destroyed.
(The 'cave' collapses into the 'desert valley')
(Un-named and Grabski fall into 'water')
(SCENE ENDS, All actors go off stage)
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Name suggestion for Un-named: Krajakh. The way you have him speaking sounds somewhat Indian, so an Indian name would be good.
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