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Poem I made
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Darkness falls over the horizon of days,
The death of my bride in the most gruesome of ways,
Death shrouds my hourglass of time,
Corroding, and cracking its foundation until it death's silent rhyme,
The world is my prey, and I am the hunter,
Killing and slaughtering, ever so blunter,
A dark embrace of blood in my war-torn heart,
An apocalypse of evil in the most ways so I thought.

My world of epiphanies only grows more dark,
The world of pain is upon my every beat of my heart,
A knife clutched in my hand,
forsaken in gone, like every other man,
They draw closer and closer, like a snake in the forest
And I was the mouse they searched to eat, Durest.

This is part of something for my book, yes I am writing a book, why do you think I am so inactive on this site. The name at the end is a character in the book, only for I shall reveal more of my book later if you people would like.



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#2
*turns into emo song*
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#3
(06-16-2011, 01:12 AM)Ming-Yan Wrote: *turns into emo song*

._.
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(06-16-2011, 01:12 AM)Ming-Yan Wrote: *turns into emo song*

I got a beat for that to happen.
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(06-18-2011, 12:39 AM)Ice Wrote:
(06-16-2011, 01:12 AM)Ming-Yan Wrote: *turns into emo song*

I got a beat for that to happen.

Ohhh, me likey.
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(06-18-2011, 12:39 AM)Ice Wrote:
(06-16-2011, 01:12 AM)Ming-Yan Wrote: *turns into emo song*

I got a beat for that to happen.

Care to publish and get an aggregated score of 11% on Metacritic?
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#7
I like it. Dark and gloomy with a nice reason to be :3
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